Sketchbook Project 2012 - pages 14-15

For Sketchbook Project 2012, topic "The Science of Story". This is pages 14 and 15, done in pencil. Quote by Chuck Palahniuk, written on Scrapbook paper and pasted to page.

My page at the Arthouse Co-op Sketchbook Project - [link]

Reference for middle person in the drawing was found on several websites with no original source. If anyone knows the original source, please let me know and I'll update it. Thanks